Monday, December 13, 2010

Relative Clauses

A relative clause is inserted into the middle of an independent clause and it acts as an adjective: it gives a description about the subject of the independent clause.

The three words that most often start a relative clause are that, which and who.

When starting a relative clause with "that," there is no need for commas. For example:

IC: The book is really good.
IC with RC: The book that I'm reading now is really good.

However, when starting a relative clause with who or which, you do need to separate the relative clause from the rest of the sentence with commas. For example:

IC: Johnny runs faster than anyone I've ever seen.
IC with RC: Johnny, who won the state championship last year, runs faster than anyone I've ever seen.

IC: Mom-mom is coming over for dinner.
IC with RC: Mom-mom, which is what I call my grandmother, is coming over for dinner.

Your Assignment:
Create six independent clauses and then create an independent clause with a relative clause from the independent clause, justu like I did above. So, six sets of sentences.

83 comments:

  1. ic:i love to ride my bmx bike
    ic:i am going to go pla lacrosse in a inddoor lacrosse place
    ic:i like to play with my friend dan
    ic:i like to play with my friend ben
    ic:i make bike jumps in the wods by my house
    ic:i have a dog named buddy
    ic:i have a little brother named finn

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  2. 1) IC:Riddick was running around the yard.
    IC with RC: Riddick, who is my very friendly dog, was running around the yard.

    2) IC:The bird tweeted in the tree.
    IC with RC: The bird, who had silky red-brown feathers, tweeted in the tree.

    3) IC:My brother loves to build legos.
    IC with RC: My brother, who built over 30 lego creations, loves to build legos.

    4) IC:My crazy cat loves to climb on shelves.
    IC with RC: My crazy cat, who knocked down so many of our plants, loves to climb on shelves.

    5) IC:My parents planed a trip to the Bahamas on a cruise on Christmas day!
    IC with RC: My parents, who are so loving and caring to my brother and I, planed a trip to the Bahamas on a cruise on Christmas day!

    6) IC:The rollercoaster ride creaked under the speeding cart filled with screaming, laughing people.
    IC with RC:The rollercoaster ride, which was very old, creaked under the speeding cart filled with screaming, laughing people.

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  3. IC: Kaity is my bff.
    IC with RC: Kaity, who loves horses, is my bff

    IC: I went snowmobiling with my dad.
    IC with RC: I went snowmobiiling with my dad, who bought me a snowmobile two years ago.

    IC: I went horseback riding.
    IC with RC: I went horseback riding with my cousin, who is in college.

    IC: I have a science project.
    IC with RC: I have a science project that is due tomorrow.

    IC: I went to the mall with my mom.
    IC with RC: I went to the mall with my mom, who is going back to college to be a teacher.

    IC: I went to my neighbor's house.
    IC with RC: I went to my neighbor's, who has a little dog.

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  4. Midget man can bet me in a fight
    Midget man, my friend John who is a karate teacher can beat me in a fight.
    In football I tackle people.
    In football, play defensive line I tackle people.
    I drive a fast car
    I, a 2010 stinger with a triple action motor with 200 port pistons.

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  5. IC:This television is big.
    IC with RC:This is the biggest televsion that I've ever seen.
    IC:He is very old.
    IC with RC:He is the oldest person that I've ever seen.
    IC:Jamie won the contest.
    IC with RC:Jamie, who won the contest, is the master of games.

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  6. IC~My school is really boaring.
    IC/RC~My school, Riverhead Middle School, is really boaring.

    IC~My pencil just broke.
    IC/RC~My pencil that I found in my sisters room just broke.

    IC~I can't believe I used to think I ran fast.
    IC/RC~I can't believe, when I was four I used to think I could run fast.

    IC~My english teacher is cool.
    IC/RC~My english teacher, Mrs. puccio, is cool.

    IC~Why is there a refrigerator in my computer room.
    IC/RC~Why is there a refregerator in the middle of my computer room.

    IC~My post-its are blue.
    IC/RC~My post-its, that I got from Staples, are blue.

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  7. IC: My dog is really happy.
    IC with RC: My dog is really happy which makes my cat nervous.
    IC: My sister is really annoying.
    IC with RC: My sister is really annoying when she talks a lot.
    IC: I go home on the bus.
    IC with RC: I go home on the bus which is faster.

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  8. IC: My cat is fat.

    IC with RC: My cat is fat when it eats too much food.

    IC: I ride my bike.

    IC with RC: I ride my bike when it's warm.

    IC: I like gym.

    IC with RC: I like gym when we play sports.

    IC: I like pie.

    IC with RC: I like pie with ice cream on the side.

    IC: I like pizza.

    IC with RC: I like pizza with extra cheese.

    IC: I like lunch.

    IC with RC: I like lunch when I sit with my friends.

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  9. IC- My brother is loud.

    IC/RC- My brother is loud, when he has a nerf gun fight with my uncle.


    IC- My crazy dog, jumps on me.

    IC/RC- My Crazy dog, that I named Cooper, jumps on me.


    IC- I listened to really loud music.

    IC/RC- I listened to pop, country, and R&B music really loud.


    IC- My dog broke an ornament.

    IC/RC- My dog Cooper pulled on the branch of the tree and broke and ornament.


    IC- My brother broke the bowl.

    IC/RC- Mt brother broke the fruit bowl that was on the counter.


    IC- My book is orange and black.

    IC/RC- My book, that I got from borders, is orange and black.

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  10. :P Hunter Canavan :DDecember 14, 2010 at 6:52 PM

    IC: Bryce is short.
    IC&RC: My sister said, Bryce is short.

    IC: He ran with me
    IC&RC: He, my best friend, Ran with me

    IC: My computer is slow.
    IC&RC: My computer, that i got from best buy is slow.

    IC: My family is annoying.
    IC&RC: My family, that I love is annoying.

    IC: MY toy was broke.
    IC&RC: My toy that I loved dearly, was broke.

    IC: MY foot was twisted.
    IC&RC: My foot that I walked on every day, was twisted.

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  11. IC- I love pizza.
    IC/RC- I love pizza, at carlos's pizza.
    IC- Christmas is my favorite holiday
    IC/RC Christmas is my favorite, with family and presents.
    ic- Dogs are my favorite pet.
    IC/RC- Dogs are my favorite pet, but i also like snakes.
    IC-Why can't i pet the snake.
    IC/RC- Why can't i pet the snake, because i am afraid of them.
    IC- My christmas tree is huge.
    IC/RC- My christmas tree is huge, also green.
    IC- I like english.
    IC/RC- I like english, but also math.

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  12. IC: I have a very cool friend.
    IC: My friend Jason is very cool.
    IC: My english teacher is cool.
    IC: Mrs.puccio the english teacher is cool.
    IC: My computer blacked out on me.
    IC: My crapy computer blacked out on me.

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  13. IC: My brother loves school
    IC And RC: My brother, who gets all A’s in school, loves school

    IC: My sister loves to draw
    IC And RC: My sister, who haves over 20 sketching books, loves to draw

    IC: I love the color blue
    IC And RC: I, who has her wall painted blue, love the color blue

    IC: My brother loves sports
    IC And RC: My brother, who plays a lot of sports, loves sports

    IC: My sister likes to play board games
    IC And RC: My sister, who loses every board game she plays, loves to play board games

    IC: I like to eat Lucky Charms for breakfast
    IC And RC: I, who eats Lucky Charms everyday, love to eat Lucky Charms for breakfast

    IC: I like to collect shells
    IC And RC: I, who has a lot of different kinds of shells, like to collect shells

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  14. IC:Test Track is a really awesome ride.
    IC/RC:Test Track, which is at Epcot, is a really awesome ride.

    IC:Video games usually have hidden/unlockable elements.
    IC/RC:Video games, which (most of the time) get harder as you progress, usually have hidden/unlockable elements.

    IC:iPod Touch has great applications on its App Store.
    IC/RC:iPod Touch that is almost the same as iPhone has great applications on its App Store.

    IC:School is like a juvinile hall.
    IC/RC:School, which most people despise, is like a juvinile hall.

    IC:Sonic the Hedgehog is claimed to run at the speed of sound.
    IC/RC:Sonic the Hedgehog, who is SEGA's mascot, is claimed to run at the speed of sound.

    IC:Diary of a Wimpy Kid was made into a movie earier this year.
    IC/RC:Diary of a Wimpy Kid, whic is a popular book series, was made into a movie earier this year.

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  15. IC:The quad is big.
    IC and RC:The quad that is green is big.

    IC: My house is blue.
    IC and RC: My house, which I love, is blue.

    IC:Hunting is fun.
    IC and RC: Hunting, which is my hobby, is fun.

    IC:The dog is yellow.
    IC and RC: The dog, who is very funny, is yellow.

    IC:The fall is beautiful.
    IC and RC: The fall, which is my favorite time of the year, is beautiful.

    IC:The car is white
    IC and RC: The car that my mom drives is white.

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  16. IC-My freind is really nice.
    IC/RC-My freind, who I have known for a long time is really nice.
    IC-My old TV broke.
    IC/RC-My TV, which I owned for along time just recently broke.
    IC-The car runs nicely.
    IC/RC-The car that I have recently bought runs nicely.
    IC-My grandmother is thoughtful.
    IC/RC-My grandmother, who just bought me a gift is thoughtful.
    IC-The report card was mailed to my house.
    IC/RC-The report card, which I am sure I got a hundred on was mailed to my house.
    IC-The guitar has a broken string.
    IC/RC-The giutar that I had for a long time has a broken string.

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  17. IC-My friend is coming over tomorrow.
    IC with RC- My friend, who is very nice, is coming over tomorrow.

    IC- The sun shines on my face.
    IC with RC- The sun, which is very hot, shines on my face.

    IC- The flowers make my house look pretty.
    IC with RC- The flowers, which are blue, make my house look pretty.

    IC- My puppy is so hiper!
    IC with RC- My puppy, who has curly white fur, is very hiper!

    IC- The snowballs pelted my roof.
    IC with RC- The snowballs, which were very cold, pelted my roof.

    IC- My grandmother is a wonderful artist.
    IC with RC- My grandmother, who is very pretty, is a very good artist.

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  18. IC-My hamster is fat.
    IC/RC-My hamster,who eats a lot,is very fat.

    IC-The ribbon was pretty.
    IC/RC-The ribbon,that was red,was pretty.

    IC-The milk was sour.
    IC/RC-The milk,that was lumpy,was sour.

    IC-The baby was cute.
    IC/RC-The baby,that was chubby,was cute.

    IC-My hand was cold.
    IC/RC-My hand,that is pink,was cold.

    IC-My laptop is blue.
    IC/RC-My laptop,which is new,is blue.

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  19. ic-Barack Obama is a great leader.
    ic Barack Obama, who is the president, is a great leader.

    ic-Mrs P uccio is awsome.
    ic Mrs Puccio, who is an ela teacher, is awesome.

    ic-Penguins love the snow.
    ic penguins, who like the cold, love the snow.

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  20. 1. I.C.: The dog barked really loud.
    I.C with R.C: The dog that I saw in the street barked loud.

    2.I.C: The guy broke his leg.
    I.C with R.C: The guy that was working in landscape broke his leg.

    3.I.C: The bike broke.
    I.C with R.C: The bike I saw outside ran over by a car.

    4.I.C: The pizza rottened.
    I.c with R.C: The pizza I saw last night rottened

    5.I.C: The cat died.
    I.C with R.C: The cat that belonged to my neighbor got ran over and died.

    6.I.C: My teacher screamed at me.
    I.C with R.C:I got screamed at because I was missbehaving.

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  21. Ic- The pie tastes disgusting.
    Ic&Rc- The pie that I'm eating now tastes disgusting.

    Ic- Brittany is a nice person.
    Ic&Rc- Brittany, who is my friend, is a nice person.

    Ic- My sister is a great designer.
    Ic&Rc- My sister, who annoys me, is a great designer.

    Ic- Mrs. Puccio is a cool teacher.
    Ic&Rc- Mrs. Puccio, who is my ELA teacher, is cool.

    Ic- Maya is awesome.
    Ic&Rc- Maya, who is my friend, is awesome.

    Ic- My skinny jeans are colorful.
    Ic&Rc- My skinny jeans, which I love, are colorful.

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  22. IC-My homework is hard.
    IC/RC-My home work that I'm doing right now is hard.
    IC-This computer is cool.
    IC/RC- This computer that I’m using is cool.
    IC-My mom cooks really well.
    IC/RC- My mom makes tacos really good that I eat it all.
    IC- I love cake.
    IC/RC- I love cake so much that I make it myself.
    IC-I'm bored
    IC/RC-I'm so bored that I'm about to fall asleep.
    IC- I love music.
    IC/RC- I love music so much that I always sing along.

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  23. Brittany Staltare :D...December 16, 2010 at 3:15 PM

    IC- Jocabed is an awesome.
    IC with RC- Jocabed, who is my friend, is awesome.

    IC- Jenna Roca is very funny.
    IC with RC- Jenna Roca, who is my best friend, is funny.

    IC- Maya is very cool.
    IC with RC- Maya, who is my friend, is very cool.

    IC- My computer is slow.
    IC with RC- My computer, which I hate, is slow.

    IC- My ELA teacher is cool.
    IC with RC- My ELA teacher, who I like, is very cool.

    IC- A volcano exploded.
    IC with RC- A volcano, which I heard about, has exploded.

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  24. IC-my brother is a really good soccer player.
    IC-with RC-My brother,who won the trophy game is a really good soccer player.
    IC-My mom who always shops is weird.
    IC with RC-my mom,when she goes shopping she sings.
    CI- my dad who goes to work is tier.
    CI with RC-My dad who goes to work always cames tier.

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  25. IC: I got a dog.
    IC with RC: I got a dog, he was very hyper.
    IC: I got a cat.
    IC with RC: I got a cat, he scratch me.
    IC: I won a soccer game.
    IC with RC: At the soccer game I slipped.
    IC: I wrestled.
    IC with RC: I wrestled, and I got choked.
    IC: I played baseball.
    IC with RC: I played baseball, I got hit with the ball.
    IC: A dog bit me.
    IC with RC: A dog bit me, I kick it.

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  26. IC: Georgia loves to play in the snow.
    IC with RC: Georgia, who is my dog, loves to play in the snow.

    IC: The snowball was really cold.
    IC with RC: The snowball that hit my face was really cold.

    IC: The cookies were so good.
    IC with RC: The cookies that I got from the bakery were so good.

    IC: My aunt is a good artist.
    IC with RC: My aunt, who paints a lot of pictures, is a good artist.

    IC: The car is red.
    IC with RC: The car, which is really fast, is red.

    IC: My friend scored a goal.
    IC with RC: My friend, who plays lacrosse, scored a goal.

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  27. 1) IC: The world’s smallest violin is very cool.
    IC, with RC: The smallest violin, which is very dark brown, is very cool.

    2) IC: My aunt is very nice.
    IC with RC: My aunt, who I call Tia, is very nice.

    3) IC: The bus is very smelly.
    IC with RC: The bus that I ride everyday is very smelly.

    4)IC:Riverhead Blue Waves are cool.
    IC with RC: Riverhead Blue Waves, which I cheer at every football game, are cool.

    5)IC:Ms. Conners is very nice.
    IC with RC: Ms. Conners, who's my favorite teacher, is very nice.

    6) IC: The red car is very nice.
    IC with RC: The red car, which I want, is blue.

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  28. IC: My mom works hard.
    IC with RC: My mom, who is loving and caring, works hard.

    IC: My brother hates eating pie.
    IC with RC: My brother, who loves eating cooked apples, hates eating pie.

    IC: My step dad loves eating steak.
    IC with RC: My step dad, who gives my dog the steak bone, loves eating steak.

    IC: My teacher is really fun.
    IC with RC: My math teacher, who is really fun, loves teaching us.

    IC: My step sister is really funny.
    IC with RC: My step sister, who is funny, loves going to school.

    IC: My friend is nice.
    IC with RC: My friend Jensy, who is very nice, likes to sing and dance.

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  29. Mrs puccio this is an add on.

    ic-My hamser is so cute.
    ic My hamster,which is really tiny, is so cute.

    ic-The snow is so pretty.
    ic The snow,which is so freezing, is so pretty

    ic-Mrs Fab is so cool.
    ic Mrs Fab,who is the french teacher, is so cool.

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  30. IC-My grandmother is coming to my house.
    IC with RC: My grandmother, who likes to knit, is coming to my house.

    IC- My brother likes to eat vanilla icecream.
    IC with RC:My brother,who likes vanilla,is younger than me.

    IC- My sister likes to see a lot of television.
    IC with RC: My sister, who is smart, likes to see a lot of television.

    IC-My aunt had a child.
    IC with RC:My aunt, who had a child, is a good mom.

    IC-My mom likes to cook a lot.
    IC with RC: My mom, who cooks a lot, is nice.

    IC- My dad works very hard.
    IC with RC: My dad, who likes to earn money for our stuff, is nice.

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  31. IC- Jenna is so awesome.
    IC with RC- Jenna, who is my best friend, is so awesome.

    IC- The book has a very interesting title.
    IC with RC- The book, titled Snapshots, has a very interesting title.

    IC- My friends go to the movies every Saturday night.
    IC with RC- My friends, who like popcorn, go to the movies every Saturday.

    IC- Brooke is my best friend.
    IC with RC- Brooke, who is really awesome and crazy, is my best friend.

    IC- My friends have been in a hot air balloon ride.
    IC with RC- My friends, who live in North Carolina, have been in a hot air balloon ride.

    IC- Jenna is my best friend.
    IC with RC- Jenna, who needs mental help, is my best friend.

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  32. IC - Rashad was doing push-ups.
    ic with rc - Rashad, who is my friend, was doing push-ups.
    IC - My dog is running around the house.
    IC with rc- My dog, whose name is Bear, was running around the house.
    ic - Obama is the president that lives in the White House.
    ic with rc - Obama, who is the president, lives in the White House.
    ic - My brother sometimes act like a baby.
    ic with rc -My brother, whose name is Troyshawn, sometimes acts like a baby.
    ic - My sister has a daughter that is very pretty.
    ic with rc - My sister, who has long hair, has a daughter that is very pretty.
    ic - My mom is loud and anoying.
    ic with rc - My mom, who has short hair, is loud and anoying.

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  33. IC- Maya is crazy.
    IC with RC- Maya, who is very extremely vibrant, is crazy too.

    IC-Brittany is a nerd with me.
    IC with RC- Brittany, who is my best friend, is a nerd with me.

    IC- Jocabed likes balloons.
    IC with RC- Jocabed, who is my best friend, likes balloons.

    IC- Maya is mental.
    IC with RC- Maya, who is weird, needs mental help.

    IC- The book im reading is good
    IC with RC- The book, titled identical,is good.

    IC- The twilight movies are awesome.
    IC with RC- The twilight movies, which have vampires in it, are awesome.

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  34. IC:My dad is good at math.
    IC/RC:My dad, who helps us with our homework, is good at math.
    IC:The game was really fun.
    IC/RC:The game that I played was really fun.
    IC:The water balloon popped as it hit the ground.
    IC/RC:The water balloon, which was red, popped as it hit the ground.
    IC:My hat kept me warm.
    IC/RC:My hat, which was very furry, kept me warm.
    IC:Gavin Kanoa loves Hawaii.
    IC/RC:Gavin Kanoa, who is my brother, loves Hawaii.
    IC:My mom loves to read gigantic books.
    IC/RC:My mom, who is very smart, loves to read gigantic books.

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  35. IC: I went to a concert.
    IC & RC: I went to a concert that I played in.
    IC: I had a docters apointment.
    IC & RC: I had to a docters apointment which I had to go to.
    IC: The room was empty.
    IC & RC: The room was empty when I got there.
    IC: The doorbell rang.
    IC & RC: The doorbell rang when I started my homework.
    IC: It was dark out.
    IC & RC: It was dark out when I had to get in the car.
    IC: It was cold outside.
    IC & RC: It was cold outside when I had to leave.

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  36. IC - The car is really fast.
    IC with RC The car, with the red tires, is really fast.

    IC. My parrot likes to sing.
    IC with RC My parrot names Ruby, likes to sing.

    IC I like chocolate ice cream.
    IC with RC I ate chocolate ice cream, which is my favorite flavor.

    IC I enjoying reading.
    IC with RC I enjoy reading, my favorite book is Rules.

    IC I made a necklace.
    IC with RC I made a necklace, which I gave to Kim, was purple.

    IC Hello Kitty is a cool cartoon.
    IC with RC. Hello Kitty who wears a bow on her head, is cool cartoon.

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  37. IC:My Xbox broke.
    IC with RC:My Xbox, which I have had for a long time, just broke.

    IC:My arm broke.
    IC with RC:My arm , which I have never broken, I just broke.

    IC:Matt is very fast.
    IC with RC:Matt, how is my best friend, is fast.

    IC:I just got a new video game.
    IC with RC:My new video game, which I have waited so long for, I just got.

    IC:I got hit with a snowball.
    IC with RC:The snowball, which I got hit with, is cold.

    IC:My dog is fast.
    IC with RC:My dog, that is for years old, is fast.

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  38. IC: The snow is falling.
    IC with RC: The snow that has just fallen is really deep.

    IC: Buster is smarter than all of my other dogs.
    IC with RC: Buster, who know how to sit, lay, bow,and beg, is smarter than all of my other dogs.

    IC: Indigo is my favorite color.
    IC with RC: Indigo, which is a color in the rainbow, is my favorite color.

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  39. Mr.M1k3 4m0d30 or Mike Amodeo lolDecember 17, 2010 at 8:34 PM

    IC:Vincent is sad
    IC with RC:Vincent, who is usually happy, is sad.

    IC:My internet is slow.
    IC with RC:My internet, which is always fast is slow.

    IC:My dad is good at reading.
    IC with RC: My dad, who helps me with my s.s hw is good at reading.

    IC:My bike is broken.
    IC with RC:My bike, that I really liked broke.

    IC:Aidan is smart.
    IC with RC: Aidan, who is my friend is smart.

    IC:Shawn broke his leg.
    IC with RC:Shawn, who is my best friend broke his leg.

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  40. IC:My Christmas lights won't work.
    IC with RC:My Christmas, lights that I just bought, won't work.

    IC:I love snow.
    IC with RC:I love,wet,snow.

    IC:I eat sour crout.
    IC with RC:I eat,on mashed potatoes,sour crout.

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  41. IC:My cat is really lazy.
    IC with RC: My cat, who's 7 years old, is really lazy.

    IC: My book has pages ripped out.
    IC with RC: My book that I got when I was 2 has pages ripped out.

    IC: My grandpa loves to solve 1,000 piece puzzles.
    IC with RC: My grandpa, who is very patient, loves to solve 1,000 piece puzzles.

    IC: My coat kept me warm.
    IC with RC: The coat that I just bought kept me warm.

    IC: Once my thumb broke.
    IC with RC: Once my thumb, which I slammed in a door, broke.

    IC: My grandparents gave me money for Christmas last year.
    IC with RC: My grandparents gave me money, so I could buy clothes, for Christmas last year.

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  42. IC: my brother is funny.
    IC/RC: my brother is funny, when he is in a good mood.
    IC: my mom is nice to me.
    IC/RC: my mom that’s name Shanna, is nice to me.
    IC: Jeremiah plays football better than anyone I know.
    IC/RC: Jeremiah, who got moved to varsity, plays better than anyone I know.
    IC: my cousins love oovoo.
    IC/RC: my cousins’ who oovoo me all the time, loves oovoo.
    IC: my sister doesn’t like school.
    IC/RC: my sister that makes honor roll every month doesn’t like school.
    IC: Jessica is bad.
    IC/RC: Jessica who puts stuff on your face, when your sleep, is bad.

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  43. ic's:
    I like christmas.
    I dont like school.
    That jacket is warm.
    I like sports.
    My dog is hiper.
    That house is nice.
    ic&rc's:
    I like to get together with family on chrismas.
    I dont like school, especially waking up early.
    That jacket with fur inside is warm.
    I like to play sports with friends.
    My very small dog is really hiper and jumps around the house.
    That hose with all of the decorations for chritsmas is really nice.

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  44. Dear Mrs.puccio,

    The anonymous one is from me I guess the name didn't go through sorry... see your Monday.

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  45. IC: My dog keeps eating.
    IC with RC: My dog, who has a big appetite, keeps eating.

    IC: My uncle is a doctor.
    IC with RC: My uncle that is named Gary is a doctor.

    IC: The heat made me sweat.
    IC with RC: The heat, which is very hot, made me sweat.

    IC: My cold made me tired.
    IC with RC: My cold, which was a very bad cold, made me tired.

    IC: The TV was hurting my eyes.
    IC with RC: The TV, which was flashing uncontrollably, was hurting my eyes.

    IC: The tuna fish I ate made me sick.
    IC with RC: The tuna fish I ate, which was stale, made me sick.

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  46. IC:Our serving helped us win the volleyball game.
    RC:Our serving which is really good helped us win the volleyball game.
    IC:RMS chamber orchestra won the competion.
    RC:RMS chamber orchestra who practices really hard won the competition.
    IC:I didn't finish the book my friend gave me.
    RC:I didn't finish the book which was super boring that my friend gave me.
    IC:My sister broke her leg in dance class.
    RC:My sister who is really clumsy broke her leg in dance class.
    IC:I failed my SATs my senior year
    RC:I failed my SATs which I didn't study for in my senior year.
    IC:I cracked my skull when i fell off my bike.
    RC:I cracked my skull when I didn't where a helmet and I fell off my bike.

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  47. IC:The movie was really good.
    IC with RC: The movie that i saw was really good.

    IC:I pet my dog.
    IC with RC: I pet my dog witch was very fluffy.

    IC: I saw a brown deer.
    IC with RC: I saw a deer witch was brown run across my lawn.

    IC:I rode my bike to the park.
    IC with RC: I rode my bike to the park witch was through the woods.

    IC:I wore my favorite shirt today.
    IC with RC:I wore my favorite shirt today witch was pink.

    IC:The curtains are purple.
    IC with RC: the curtains that i got today are purple.

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  48. IC: I rode my bike around the neighborhood.
    IC with RC: I rode my bike that is new around the neighborhood.

    IC: My dinner was good.
    IC with RC: My dinner, which was steak, was good.

    IC: My dog is cute.
    IC with RC: My dog, who is a Yorkiepoo, is cute.

    IC: Ryan did homework at the table.
    IC with RC: Ryan did homework, which was a math assignment, at the table.

    IC: I made ornaments in Home and Careers class.
    IC with DC: I made ornaments that are in the shape of hearts in Home and Careers class.

    IC: Ryan hates pumpkin pie.
    IC with DC: Ryan, who is my brother, hates pumpkin pie.

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  49. Ic-I like icecream
    Rc- i like icecreaam that tastes like cake.

    Ic- I like dogs.
    Rc- I like dogs who are very little.

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  50. IC: jill is good at soccer
    RC: jill, who won the soccer state championship, is really good at soccer

    IC: tony is a good quarterback
    RC: tony, who broke the record for most passin yards this year, is a really good quarterback

    IC: stargirl is really wierd
    RC: stargirl, who cheers for people doing ordinary everyday things, is really wierd

    IC: my mom is a good cook
    RC: my mom, who won the school bakeoff last year, is a good cook

    IC: bob has good handwriting
    RC: bob, who is a lefty, has good handwriting

    IC: mrs puccio uses correct grammar
    RC: mrs puccio, who is my e.l.a teacher, always uses correct grammar

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  51. IC: My dog loves fish
    IC&RC: He loves fish so much,that he is going to turn into a fish.

    IC: My dad is good at SUDUKO.
    IC&RC: my dad is patient, thats why he is good at SUDUKO.

    IC: Apples make me sick.
    IC&RC: I got sick because of apples, Were bad.

    IC: My blankets kept me warm.
    IC&RC: My grandma got me blankets, that heped keep me warm.

    IC: Piano makes your fingers hurt.
    IC&RC: when I am done playing piano, my fingers hurt.

    IC: Candy makes me sick.
    IC&RC: After Holloween, my stomach hurt real bad.

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  52. IC:The sport I love is Lacrosse.
    IC with RC: The sport I love, which is fun, is lacrose.
    IC:Kerry makes good pancakes
    IC with RC:Kerry Thomas, who studied cooking in France, makes good pancakes.
    IC:My sister is good at Lacrosse.
    IC with RC:My sister, who practices a lot, is good at lacrosse
    New York has cold weather
    New York, because it is in the north, has cold weather.
    IC:I hate cold weather
    IC with RC:I hate the winter because it has cold
    weather
    IC:The tree was big.
    IC with RC:The tree that got alot of sun was big.

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  53. IC: I have good handwriting.
    IC/RC: I have good handwriting, because I am a lefty.

    IC: Stargirl is very weird.
    IC/RC: Stargirl is very weird, because she wears weird dresses.

    IC: He is a very good wide reciever.
    IC/RC: He has the most recieving yards, so he is a good reciever.

    IC: My dog is very playful.
    IC/RC: My dog, who is a puppie, is very playful.

    IC: My mom is short.
    IC/RC: My mom, who is 5'2 is very short.

    IC: I like gym.
    IC/RC: I like gym, which is my favorite subject.

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  54. Jessica Rose NicholsonDecember 19, 2010 at 11:43 AM

    IC: My Mom is very weird!
    IC/RC: My Mom,who sings random songs, is very weird!

    IC: My friends are funny.
    IC/RC: My friends, who like to howl at the moon, are funny.

    IC: The flounder is really yummy.
    IC/RC: The flounder, which I caught, is really yummy.

    IC: These feathers are soft.
    IC/RC: These feathers that are in my pillow are soft.

    IC: This magazine is very interesting!
    IC/RC: This magazine, which is titled "Seventeen", is very interesting!

    IC: Natalia is an awesome friend!
    IC/RC: Natalia, who is totally random and crazy, is an awesome friend!

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  55. IC- My teacher does not like kids.
    IC with RC- My teacher, Mr.Butter, does not like kids.

    IC-Emily dances better than anyone I have seen
    IC with RC-Emily, who won a dance competition last year, dances better than anyone I have seen.

    IC-Mia hates olives
    IC with RC-Mia, my younger sister, hates olives.

    IC-I drove my car to New York.
    IC with RC- I drove, my new truck to New York.

    IC- Ron got new shoes.
    IC with RC-Ron, my friend, got new shoes.

    IC-Fireworks scare me.
    IC with RC-Fireworks, on the fourth of July, scare me.

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  56. IC:My mom and I went for a walk.
    IC/RC:My mom, who loves to run and I went for a walk.

    IC:My dog likes to chew things.
    IC/RC: My dog, who has sharp teeth, likes to chew things.

    IC: Her brothers are wild.
    IC/RC: Her brothers, who play football in the house are wild.

    IC: The old lady loves her dog.
    IC/RC: The old lady that lives by herself loves her dog.

    IC: The boy likes candy.
    IC/RC: The boy that has a cavity likes candy.

    IC: Playing the viola while pressing on the strings hurts your fingers.
    IC/RC: The viola that I played in my concert hurt my fingers.

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  57. IC: Ruby is very hyper.
    IC/RC: Ruby, which is my dog is very hyper today.

    IC: It is cold outside.
    IC/RC: It's cold, that is because it is winter.

    IC: My computer is slow.
    IC/RC: My computer, which is old, is slow.

    IC: Dance makes my muscles sore.
    IC/RC: Dance, which uses alot of muscle strength, makes my muscles sore.

    IC: I have to go to my Memere's house tonight.
    IC/RC: Memere, which is what I call my grandmother, has invited my family over t her house tonight.

    IC: Ken is working on his racecar.
    IC/RC: Ken, who is my stepfather, is working on his racecar today.

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  58. IC:my dog runs fast.
    RC:whenever he gets outside getting him that is the hard thing
    IC:my computer is annoying.
    RC:Its to slow sometimes after i use it.
    IC:i love music.
    RC:Music which gets me in the mood to dance.
    IC:i dont like gym,
    RC: i dont like gym because you have to change which i hate.
    Ic:I love my aguela.
    RC:guela which is spanish for grandma.
    IC:i hate wasting money.
    RC:i hate spending my money because after im done shopping i got nothing left.

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  59. IC:I ran home with my brother.
    IC&RC: My brother, who did track, beat me on the way home.

    IC: I have a sweet tooth.
    IC&RC: That sweet tooth I have influences me to eat candy.

    IC: My dad puts out the trash
    IC&RC: Before he goes to work, he takes out the garbage, for the garbage truck.

    IC: My sister loves scary movies.
    IC&RC: That horror movie she watched the other day made her have nightmares.

    IC: I like to watch soccer.
    IC&RC: My favortie time to watch soccer, is during the world cup, which was this past summer.

    IC: My friend is rich.
    IC&RC: That friend I have has a mansion and alot of the latest gadgets.

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  60. IC- The cookies are good.

    IC/RC- The cookies, that my mom made,are good.

    IC- The pizza was good.

    IC/RC- The pizza, from pizza Hut , was good.

    IC-My blanket is cool.

    IC/RC-My blanket is cool,the one with a bear on it.


    IC- That dogi is so cute.

    IC/RC-That dogi, with the fluffy, coat is so cute


    IC-That ipod is so cool

    IC/RC-That ipod, with a built in camera, is so cool.


    IC-That nail is so dangerous.

    IC/RC-That nail with a pointy tip is dangerous.

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  61. ic-basketball makes you tired.
    ic/rc-when im done with basketball im tired.

    ic-typeing hurts my fingers.
    ic/rc-when im done typeing my fingers hurt.

    ic-sleeping gives you energy.
    ic/rc-after sleeping i have alot of energy.

    ic-practice makes you better.
    ic/rc-when im done practiceing football im better.

    ic-working makes you tired.
    ic/rc-after work i am tired.

    ic-family makes you happy.
    ic/rc- when im with my family im happy.

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  62. 1) IC: My cat broke a lamp.
    IC with RC: My cat, who is very clumsy, broke a lamp.

    2) IC: I went bowling today.
    IC with RC: I went bowling with my family today.

    3) IC: My Christmas tree is very big.
    IC with RC: My Christmas tree, in my living room, is very big.

    4) IC: The Riverhead Middle School cheerleaders won their competition.
    IC with RC: The Riverhead Middle School cheerleaders, who practice really hard, won their competition.

    5) IC: I have to wrap Christmas presents.
    IC with RC: I have to wrap my family's Christmas presents.

    6) IC: The apple pie was really good.
    IC: The apple pie, that my grandma made, was really good.

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  63. Helene says "I'm sorry if it's late."December 19, 2010 at 2:19 PM

    IC: Icecream is my favorite food.
    IC&RC: Icecream,especially vanilla flavor, is my favorite food.

    IC: Christmas is fun.
    IC&RC: Gathering with family on Christmas is fun.

    IC: The neighbor's house is yellow.
    IC&RC: The neighbor's house is noticeably yellow.

    IC: Cats are friendly.
    IC&RC: Cats that come up to you and purr are friendly.

    IC: My tree looks dead.
    IC&RC: My tree that is bare of leaves outside looks dead.

    IC: My lamp is broken.
    IC&RC: My lamp, the small one by my bed, is broken.

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  64. 1) IC: My puppy likes to go fast.
    IC with RC: April, my puppy, runs around the backyard going very fast.

    2) IC: I love Christmas.
    IC with RC: Every time I hear Christmas songs, It makes me happy.

    3) IC: I like to play Volleyball
    IC with RC: In Volleyball I am an outside.

    4) IC: Pizza is one of my favorte foods.
    IC with RC: I especially like pizza with pepperoni.

    5) IC: I love going to Nanna's house.
    IC with RC: Nanna, who is my Grandmother lives thrity minutes away from my house.

    6) IC: Jonathan loves to ride dirt bikes.
    IC with RC: Jonathan, my brother, has two dirtbikes and a minibike and loves to ride them.

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  65. Juliana Cintron -LeonardoDecember 19, 2010 at 2:51 PM

    IC: Being goalie hurts
    IC&RC: After i dove for the ball i hurt my knees

    IC: In the morning its cold
    IC&RC: In the morning i have to put my heater on.

    IC: Playing guitar hurts my fingers.
    IC&RC: When I’m done with a song my fingers hurt’

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  66. 1. Nicole is awesome.
    Nicole, who is my sister, is awesome.
    2. Thomas has a nice house.
    Thomas, who keeps his house clean, has a nice house.
    3. Jessica is kind.
    Jessica, who has a nice family, is kind.
    4. Kevin is a hard worker.
    Kevin, who likes earning money, works hard.
    5. Marla has nice hair.
    Marla, who keeps her body healthy, has nice hair.
    6. Kim has a nice jacket.
    Kim, who takes care of her things, has a nice jacket.

    By: kim lennon

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  67. IC:The concert at Martha Clara's was awesome
    IC&RC:The concert at Martha Clara's,which I played the cello in was awesome.
    IC:The christmas tree looks beautiful
    IC&RC:The christmas tree that our family madde looks beautful
    IC:My sister is annoying
    IC&RC:My sister is annoying, when she constantly ask me to lay with her in some game.
    IC:My cat is always wanting to get out
    IC&RC:My cat is always wanting to get out that's why you hear loud meows in my room
    IC:My older sister is in alot of concerts/plays/musicals.
    IC&RC:My older sister is in alot of concerts/plays/musicals that's why I bareley see her near opening night or before a concert
    IC:It might snow today.
    IC&RC:It might snow today, which is why my mom is reluctant to go anywhere

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  68. Ic: I like to hang out with my friends.
    Ic-Rc: My friends are nice thats why I like to hang out with them.

    Ic: Flying in plane's scare me.
    Ic-Rc: I'm afraid of hights thats why they scare me.

    Ic: I like to dance.
    Ic-Rc: I like to dance, It's fun.

    Ic: My computer Is annoying.
    Ic-Rc: When I use The computer it's annoying because it's slow.

    Ic: The flute makes me lose my breath.
    Ic-Rc: When Im done playing the flute I'm out of breath.

    Ic: Ice cream makes me cold.
    Ic-Rc: If I eat to much ice crem I get cold.

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  69. ic: My cousin Mike plays football.
    ic&rc: My cousin Mike,who attends East Islip High School, plays football.

    ic: My two dogs are named Lilly and Lulu.
    ic&rc: My two dogs, who are Dobermans, are named Lilly and Lulu.

    ic: My cat is very cuddly.
    ic&rc: My cat, who is wild and crazy, is very cuddly.

    ic: My bedroom has the colors blue, green and purple in it.
    ic&rc: My bedroom, which is very messy right now, has the colors blue, green and purple in it.

    ic: the pizza i ate was not very good.
    ic&rc: the pizza, wich was very over cooked, was not very good

    ic: Derek Jeter is my favorite baceball player
    ic&rc: Derek jeter, of the new york yankees, is my favorite player.

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  70. IC:i like to play games
    IC:i Like To Skateboard
    iC:i like to write
    IC:i like to play soccer
    IC:i have a dog named oreo
    IC:i like to play with my friend kevin
    IC:i like to play with my friend alex

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  71. IC: Bananas make me feel bad when i eat them
    IC&RC: I'am alergic to bananas, thats why i feel bad when I eat them.

    IC: My hot chocolate was cold.
    IC&RC: I left the house for an hour and fogot I made hot chocolate, thats why it was cold.

    IC: My friend loves her new yellow jacket.
    IC&RC: My friends favorite color is yellow, that is why she loves her new jacket.

    IC: There might be snow tommorow.
    IC&RC: The wheather man predicted snow tommorow, thats why there might be snow.

    IC: I want to go to Colorado.
    IC&RC: I hear Colorado is besutiful, that is why I want to go.

    IC: I couldent sleep because I kept coughing.
    IC&RC: I kept coughing because it was cold outside and I didnt have a jacket, thats why I couldent sleep.

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  72. Andraa McCarthy :D :P XDDecember 20, 2010 at 4:37 PM

    IC: My mom works hard.
    IC with RC: My mom, who is loving and caring, works hard.

    IC: My brother hates eating pie.
    IC with RC: My brother, who loves eating cooked apples, hates eating pie.

    IC: My step dad loves eating steak.
    IC with RC: My step dad, who gives my dog the steak bone, loves eating steak.

    IC: My teacher is really fun.
    IC with RC: My math teacher, who is really fun, loves teaching us.

    IC: My step sister is really funny.
    IC with RC: My step sister, who is funny, loves going to school.

    IC: My friend is nice.
    IC with RC: My friend Jensy, who is very nice, likes to sing and dance.

    This was from the Anonymous person

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  73. For some reason my name didnt come up but i was one of the onoymous ones it started with the snow is falling. and had a dog named buster in it. Sorry

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  74. THIS IS A ADD ON Mrs.Puccio.
    IC:Mrs.Puccio is very intelligent.
    IC with RCS:Mrs.Puccio, who's sitting in that corner, is very intelligent.
    IC:This computer is very fast.
    IC with RCS:This computer, that I bought yesterday, is very fast.
    IC:These clothes are very beautiful.
    IC with RCS:These clothes, that my dad gave me, are very beautiful.

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  75. mrs puccio i was the anonymus poster my post started with "jill is good at soccer"

    just incase the name/url has a problem again this is kevin okula

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  76. IC: Emmet is so well behaved.
    IC with RCS: Emmet,who is my cousins new dog, is so well behaved.
    IC: It's snowing outside.
    IC with RCS: It's snowing, because of the cold weather, outside.
    IC: Elexa is such a nice person.
    IC with RCS: Elexa, who is my best friend, is such a nice person.
    IC: The electricity went out.
    IC with RCS: The electricity, because of the storm, went out.
    IC: This room is a mess.
    IC with RCS: This room, because of the guests, is a mess.
    IC: That dog looks so clean.
    IC with RCS: That dog, because it is well groomed, looks so clean.

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  77. IC:I hate homework.
    IC with RC:I hate the homework that I am doing right now.

    IC: I am happy.
    IC with RC: I am happy that I am home right now.

    IC: I like my new bike that my dad bought.
    IC with RC: I like my new bike, which is blue and white, that my dad bought.

    IC:I had to clean my room over the vacation.
    IC with RC:I had to clean my room, which was very messy, over the vacation.

    IC:Candace is 23 years old.
    IC with RC:Candace,who is my sister,is 23years old.

    IC: I am upset that the Chargers are not in the play offs.
    IC with RC: I am upset that the Chargers, who are a football team, are not in the playoffs.

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  78. IC:I play basket ball
    ICandRC:i play basket ball very good

    IC:i got braces
    ICandRC:I got braces abd they hurt

    IC:I play video games
    ICandRC:I play video games good

    IC:I have a dog
    ICandRC:I have a dog and a rabbit.

    IC:I have seven teachers
    ICandRC:Mora and I have seven teachers.

    i will post again and send it to you

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  79. IC:I got a poster
    ICandRC:I got a poster that I got for a present from my mom
    IC:I like to eat cake
    ICandRC:I like to eat chocolate cake
    IC:I have a rabbit
    ICandRC:I have a three year old rabbit name crystal
    IC:My computer is slow
    ICandRC:My computer is slow because of all the viruses
    IC:My cousin is annoying
    ICandRC:My cousin that is 16 is very annoying
    IC:My brother is playing my wii
    ICandRC:My brother that is my twin likes to play my wii

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  80. deasia baxter said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!January 19, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    1)I got this book
    I got this book for my mom when it was her birthday
    2) I got this cool bike
    I got this cool bike for my birthday
    3) I got this dog
    I got this dog from my sister firend
    4) I got my teacher a teacher book
    I got my teacher a teacher book cause she nice
    5)I got my mom a flower
    I got my mom a flower cause it was mother day

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  81. IC:That cat is annoying at night.
    ICandRC:That cat that is 2 years old is annoying.

    IC:That friend of yours is funny.
    ICandRC:That friend of yours named Eddie is funny.

    IC:Who doesn't hate homework.
    ICandRC:Who doesn't hate math homework.

    IC:That pizza is good.
    ICandRC:That pizza at Roadhouse.

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  82. IC:i play basketball
    RC:i play basketball average

    iC:i like Dogs
    RC:i like dogs alot

    iC:i have 2 math teachers
    RC:Me and Jose have 2 math teachers

    IC:i have a nice english teachers
    RC:me and kevin have a nice english teachers

    IC:i play soccer
    RC:i play soccer very good

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  83. -Mrs.Puccio- -This is a retry-

    IC: Ashley is really smart.
    IC with RC: Ashley, who is my sister, is really smart.

    IC: My cat is adorable.
    IC with RC: My cat that isn’t fat is adorable.

    IC: The man ran to the woman.
    IC with RC: The man, who was holding a case, ran to the woman.

    IC: The girl was scared of the monster.
    IC with RC: The girl, who was really young, was scared of the monster.

    IC: The boy’s horse was his best friend.
    IC with RC: The boy’s horse, which was white, was his best friend.

    IC: My mom made us food.
    IC with RC: My mom, who is adorable, made us food.

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